''I am poem''

I am fun and nice

I wonder about my parents                                                    

I hear a bird talking

I see a horse flying up to the sky

I want good grades

I am fun and nice

I pretend I am a Angel                                           

I feel rough sand

I touch a beautiful sea shell

I worry about my cousin

I cry for my grandma that died

I am fun and nice

I understand my friends

I say my mom is nice

I dream I could meet a famous person

I try to get good grades

I hope that I could pass grade

I am fun and nice.

Comments

[Cameron]

Hi Jennifer,

Sorry it took so long to reply, I haven't been on here lately. You really surprised me, though. I didn't think you were one of the 5th graders! Your grammar and choice of words had me confused. I am very impressed. I really like your "I Am" poem; although you are a few years younger, we have a lot in common. I'm sorry about your grandmother, I recently lost mine too. Also, don't be discouraged about your grades, just make sure you try your hardest! What grades are you struggling with?

To answer your question, I do try to be "green" about some things. I'm not much of a gardener, though, so the organic garden isn't really for me.

Sincerly,
Cameron.