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Can I suggest you take a look at some of the spelling in your story? You've used some words which sound the same as the ones you want to use, but which mean something very different. This makes for a confusing read!
Posted by: chris | November 21, 2007 at 03:14 PM
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Can I suggest you take a look at some of the spelling in your story? You've used some words which sound the same as the ones you want to use, but which mean something very different. This makes for a confusing read!
Posted by: chris | November 21, 2007 at 03:14 PM