"Planet & Peril"[Endangered animals]

Hey ,Guess what we are doing ? We are writing about endangered animals! You Need to Save them! They are cute little animals that are dying out! Some people are hunting them  & they  are selling them (which it is illegal to sell endangered animals.) Please Save them!

Comments

[Mrs. Emmert]

What endangered animals did you learn about? How can we save them? Remember to proofread carefully. You are putting capital letters in the middle of your sentences. Only do this with proper nouns.

[Danny]

Dear Sarah,
I am writing this comment from Shanghai,China. I go to Shanghai American School. I am in fifth grade and we are also learning how to blog. I am supposed to comment on somebody's blog out side of Shanghai and I found your blog.
I think that it is important to save endangered animals. Did you know that the Giant Panda is an endangered animal from China? The Asian Elephant and the tiger are also endangered. People are still illegally killing them for fur and money. Have you studied any of these animals? Maybe you can visit my blog at http://blogs.saschinaonline.org/daniel01pd2015.