Dear Otavia,
One day my mom wanted to live slavery and go to Jamaica so we can get ready to go the United States.My mom had so food and the king of slavery took the food away from mama beat her as hard as he could and I cried and cried and he hit me and told me to be quit .If you need me I will be up stairs taking a nap he said.My mom told my dad to go up stairs and get our stuff because we are leaving today.I said we are going to run away yes said mom we are.Daddy got mama's Bahamas wigs and we ran off all of a sudden the king of slavery came after us and ask if we know were some of his slavery people at so we said no he did not even know it was us I was so happy because he would beat us and lock us up in a chair and throw us is a river.We ran as far as we can it was scary then all of a sudden we saw a boat and we yelled out to the boat and it finally came and rescue us and I said are we safe now yes said mama we only have only 1 hour so we waited until we were there and we were there I was so happy cause I saw some mango.
from, LaKeidrea
Lakeidra - the details in your post are terrific. I love the part where you talked about the wigs and mango! Remember to proofread your work really carefully before publishing it - I saw a few mistakes. Keep up the good work!
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | November 09, 2007 at 05:11 AM
Your story is fantastic but you have two so's in your story.
Posted by: Darnewatson | November 14, 2007 at 09:10 AM