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November 26, 2007


Ms. Roberto

Hi Joseph,
Where did you get that great picture of the cat and dog dressed up for Thanksgiving? I love it! My daughter has 4 rabbits and she dressed them up as the characters from the "Wizard Of Oz" for Halloween (Dorothy, Tin Man, Lion & Scarecrow). The rabbits did not like it one little bit! The one dressed as Dorothy even bit off her little red shoes!
I like your story about the animal Thanksgiving, but I think you need to proof read for spelling and punctuation errors. It was a little hard to read without the correct punctuation. Keep writing and trying your best!
Ms. Roberto

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