Mauricio's Fantastic Blog

Six Traits of Writing

I wrote this so you can understand.

1 .STIMULATING IDEAS = GOOD IDEAS

              2. LOGICAL ORGANIZATION =GET THE READERS ATTENTION,GET THE READERSTO                  ASKQUESTIONS.

3. PERSONAL VOICE =GOOD VOICE, EXPRESS YOUR IDEAS AND FEELINGS.

4. WORD CHOICE =GOOD WORDS

          5. SMOOTH SENTENES= COLORFUL SENTENCES.

           6. CORECT, ACURRATE, COPY =CORECT CAITALIZATION

I AM PEOM

            I am playful and quite

               I wonder when I am going to go to 12^th

               I hear god talking to me

               I see an john cena

               I want a playstation 3

               I am playful and quite

               

               I pretend I am a soccer player

               I am feeling the clouds

               I touch the sun

               I worry about my family

               I am playful and quite 

               I understand when somebody cries

               I say I am great

I dream about my family

I try to not cry

I hope I pass grade

I am playful and quite

     

Here Comes Mauricio

Hello my name is Mauricio Lopez. I like playing sports. I’m not shy I’m playful. I’m the oldest in my family I’m 11 years old. I hope to learn about other states and people. I have no fears so you can write whatever you want it won’t make me mad. I’m happy about weblogging because I will make new friends. See you later.