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You know, the opening of your story isn't really anything to do with the picture. I'd spend more time at the location of the chandelier if I were you - it's more interesting!
Posted by: chris | November 21, 2007 at 03:50 PM
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You know, the opening of your story isn't really anything to do with the picture. I'd spend more time at the location of the chandelier if I were you - it's more interesting!
Posted by: chris | November 21, 2007 at 03:50 PM