The Third Floor Bedroom

  Tina was sleeping in her bedroom on the third floor. She was actually with her aunt and uncle spending the night. Then all of the sudden the window started to open. She looked and saw nothing she went over to the window and closed it , but then it gently opened again and then for some reason she looked down and there was water on her feet.

    When she looked around she found a magical land outside which is where the water came from. She jumped out the window to explore the magical land. When she got down into the magical land she saw lots of animals but when she got to the middle of the forest there was an animal she had never heard about it was green with red,purple, and blue. She took it back home with her and put it in her closet because she heard her aunt coming up and was going to wake her up for breakfast. She went to the bed and laid down. Her aunt came and woke her up. The both went to breakfast.

       After breakfast Tina went back to the room and couldn't find the animal. She looked and looked and she found it under the dresser scared she took the animal and found a card in it's fur it was from her mom and dad because they were in Europe it was a postcard. Tina was happy ,but she could never figure out why the window kept opening and why the was a magical land.

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Comments

[Desiree]

Cassidy, you can write very well. You have some very good details.

[alejandra]

Read and listen to the second sentence in the 3th paragraph. When the podcast is says scared it says SHHHHHHHHHHHH.

[Holly]

Hi,Cassidy it's Holly.I really like your post you have awsome details.You might have wanted to look over the 2cd sentencce in paragragh 3. Other than that you did a great job on it.

[Alejandra]

Hey cassy
I loved your paragraghs. I just wanted to know why you didn't read it? well I have to go Bye. try commenting me!

[Desiree]

I love yor story but you ended it to quick.