Thougths and Fellings about Earth

I feel bad about poler bears.Their dying because their habitat is malting away! I love animals, there my LIFE!!! North pole is malting, so water that is allready pollited is polliting the new clean water. There may be no more of the nourth pole! What will become of pinnguns? The world is coming to an end.

                                                    By: Olijah

Comments

[Ms. Emmert]

I felt sad for the poplar bears too. I think you are right to be concerned about these things. But try to think about positive things we can do to make a difference. The world is not ocming to an end, but we do need to do what we can to make it a better place.

Also, I wanted to tell you that you have some really good thoughts in your posts. However, make sure to proofread and spell check to catch mistakes.