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October 11, 2007

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Alyce

This comment is about correction.

The last two sentences on your post were not metaphors, the first one was though.(a good one at that)
Sentences with "like" or "as" are similes. And, they are alot easier than metaphors.
Try thinking of some more of either one.
-Alyce

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