You used some great details to explain the picture. Do you think the ferris wheel is really on fire? What are other ways to make writing exciting to the reader?
I love your use of the word "blazing". Actually the light at the foot of the wheel is from a stall in a Christmas Market - so the wheel lived to take more riders into the sky!
You used some great details to explain the picture. Do you think the ferris wheel is really on fire? What are other ways to make writing exciting to the reader?
Posted by: Mrs. Emmert | September 22, 2007 at 05:52 PM
Your little animal is realy funny, even though i do not know what it is
Posted by: skyler | September 28, 2007 at 08:08 AM
I love your use of the word "blazing". Actually the light at the foot of the wheel is from a stall in a Christmas Market - so the wheel lived to take more riders into the sky!
Posted by: chris | November 21, 2007 at 02:16 PM
wow I loved your post you did. it really inspired me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: josh | January 16, 2008 at 08:18 AM