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September 21, 2007

Comments

Mrs. Emmert

You used some great details to explain the picture. I almost felt like I was there in the city too! What are other ways to make writing exciting to the reader?

I also love your interesting titles you give your posts! (like the CNN one)

chris

I like the simile you use when you compare the clouds to milk on the coffee table - it's very original.

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