You used some great details to explain the picture. I almost felt like I was there in the city too! What are other ways to make writing exciting to the reader?
That picture is gorgeous.Have you been to New York?I have.Time Square is so beautiful at night.Also while I was there I saw Lion King at the theatre,let me tell you it was awesome!!
I was checking out some of the blogs at JHH. Our Top Dog Blog from two years ago doesn't hold a candle to these done by you fifth graders. I am so impressed!
Can you tell me how you got that owl to describe the New York sky? I think my students would like to give that a try.
You used some great details to explain the picture. I almost felt like I was there in the city too! What are other ways to make writing exciting to the reader?
Posted by: Mrs. Emmert | September 22, 2007 at 05:40 PM
Cool, I have never been to New York, but I want to go someday.
Posted by: Evan | September 28, 2007 at 06:05 AM
That picture is gorgeous.Have you been to New York?I have.Time Square is so beautiful at night.Also while I was there I saw Lion King at the theatre,let me tell you it was awesome!!
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Posted by: Lauren | September 28, 2007 at 06:07 AM
That is a really neat picture!I think you should write about the picture to explain it a little more.Where is the picture?
Posted by: railroad | November 01, 2007 at 11:55 AM
You obviously spotted Central Park in the centre of the photo. And can you see what word in that sentence tells you I'm not from the USA? ;-)
Posted by: chris | November 21, 2007 at 02:28 PM
Dylan,
I was checking out some of the blogs at JHH. Our Top Dog Blog from two years ago doesn't hold a candle to these done by you fifth graders. I am so impressed!
Can you tell me how you got that owl to describe the New York sky? I think my students would like to give that a try.
Thanks for teaching me!
Posted by: Mrs. McCullers | January 27, 2008 at 06:41 PM