You used some great details to explain the picture. Some people do save dead flowers to remember the occasion when they got the flower. Have you ever heard for someone doing that?
What are other ways to make writing exciting to the reader?
Hi Yesenia! I read the comment that you made to me and thank you.I read yours to and I think you have done a great job on your post.Also you use great picture and adjetives.
I think this flower may have been suffering from the fact that it was blooming way out of season, when it should have been dormant. (Find out what that word means)
You used some great details to explain the picture. Some people do save dead flowers to remember the occasion when they got the flower. Have you ever heard for someone doing that?
What are other ways to make writing exciting to the reader?
Posted by: Mrs. Emmert | September 22, 2007 at 05:54 PM
Hi Yesenia! I read the comment that you made to me and thank you.I read yours to and I think you have done a great job on your post.Also you use great picture and adjetives.
Posted by: oralia | October 15, 2007 at 08:19 AM
I think this flower may have been suffering from the fact that it was blooming way out of season, when it should have been dormant. (Find out what that word means)
Posted by: chris | November 21, 2007 at 02:34 PM