Dear Mrs. Parks

Would you like to learn about Utah, well if you do than come along and learn with me.

The state Utah has many things that we can learn about it. For intense, there nickname is the bee hive state.  There’s more that we can learn. There sate has more than 3,000 people.  The abbreviation is UT. The date of the statehood is January4, 1896. The most liked hotel is park city. The state fish is the Bonneville cutthroat trout. The state gemstone is the topaz. (That sounds pretty.)The area is 84,904 square miles. The state insect is the honey bee. The state bird is the California gull. (I wonder what that eats.) The last thing is that the state tree is named blue spruce. I told you that it would be a lot of information. I hope you had fun learning with me because I did.

Comments

[chloe]

Hey! Your state is really good. But on your second sentence the w needs to be upper case and you have a few mispelled words. Apart from that your blog is goin really well. Oh and remember to log on to my blog. See Yah!

[Cole]

I like the opening sentence you used in your paragraph. What other things are you studying in school?

[shaia]

dear cole,

thank you! i'm learning words like aveoli, respatory system,and alot more. thanks for commenting on my blog. bye!

[shaia]

dear cole,

thank you! i'm learning words like aveoli, respatory system,and alot more. thanks for commenting on my blog. bye!

[Chelsea]

Hey Shaia it is Chelsea your classmate. I really liked all the info you got on Utah but you really might want to change the title if it is about Utah.

[yesenia]

hey Shaia I lved your post I didn't no that Mrs.Parks did that. Have you ever asked any questions I mean a very hard question that teachers cant answer?

[Ed Roberts]

Dear Shaia, I am Ms. Emmert's dad and I read your blog. Do you know why they call it blogging? sounds like a funny thing to call it. Anyway, see you later. Bye