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You used some great details to explain the sunset. What are other ways to make writing exciting to the reader?
Posted by: Mrs. Emmert | September 22, 2007 at 05:37 PM
I like your linking of happiness and sadness with sunset - that's how I feel about that time of day!
Posted by: chris | November 21, 2007 at 02:38 PM
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You used some great details to explain the sunset. What are other ways to make writing exciting to the reader?
Posted by: Mrs. Emmert | September 22, 2007 at 05:37 PM
I like your linking of happiness and sadness with sunset - that's how I feel about that time of day!
Posted by: chris | November 21, 2007 at 02:38 PM