I was in my room as i noticed my window was open.I went to go close it.then a bird flew in i thought i just closed this window.Download Money.mp3  I went to go pick up my sister.when we came home the bird was destroying everything in the house.I hit it with a bat and the bat went through the bird.We went to the police and they ran from the bird.Rain poured out the sky and the bird was gone.We knew it was gone when we didn't see it anymore.

                                                                                       three weeks later...

(news)"crazy bird attacking people of China."

(boy)"I hope it rains".

Comments

[Aaron]

Your story is cool. The part about the car ceys i didnot undersand.

[Autumn]

Money That was really good story you had a being middle,and end. I saw a few mistakes. You didn't capitalize the word "them' at the beging of the story. I notcied the you took some of the sentences out of the story while Mrs.Emmert was reading it. Although it was a good story!!!!

[javier]

hi money i like your story but you forgot to add more words to the story when Mrs.Emmert was reading it she saide different words.

[shay]

Money you really used your imagination. I really tried to use mine but it kinda didn't work!You used a litle of discriptive language,but the reason why I liked it was because you used your imagination.