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December 13, 2007



Your story is cool. The part about the car ceys i didnot undersand.


Money That was really good story you had a being middle,and end. I saw a few mistakes. You didn't capitalize the word "them' at the beging of the story. I notcied the you took some of the sentences out of the story while Mrs.Emmert was reading it. Although it was a good story!!!!


hi money i like your story but you forgot to add more words to the story when Mrs.Emmert was reading it she saide different words.


Money you really used your imagination. I really tried to use mine but it kinda didn't work!You used a litle of discriptive language,but the reason why I liked it was because you used your imagination.

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