It all started when I read a book of shadows in Mr.lindens library everything was ok into I fell asleep. I forgot to close the book vines started to grow lights started to flick.I was asleep but it was cold the bed was sinking in the widows were opening back and forth. I thought I was dying but then I tried to close it but it wouldn't. But when my sister tried it closed, like I didn't have control of anything anymore at all it was scary.Download Brittney.mp3
Brittany,
You leaft out alot of words. I think that you could do better on making a paragraph. Try to look over the rules of writing and maybe you could come up with something better,but anyways it was pretty cool
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Posted by: cassidy | December 18, 2007 at 08:32 AM
Even if it is short it is a great story expecialy with great discriptive writing.
Posted by: SHAY | December 18, 2007 at 09:13 AM