Autumn Time

The reason why I have this venn diagram because we have been learning about the body system in science class. I think its very cool to learn about your body and important. What do you know about your body from looking at my venn diagram?

Thanking You For Your Comment

Hey, everybody I'm back! When I was on web blogs Ms.Copeland sent me a comment. I really loved this comment because it was by teacher and she asked questions that I really didn't think about when I was writing.The comment was very cool. Would you like to See it? OK hear it is:I love your poem! What do you want a second chance to do? How do you touch people's souls? Why do you cry for your cousin? I want to know more.Know you see why I picked this comment.What do you think!!

Fun, Fun, Fun

I hear people screaming, roller coasters working where am I? Can you imagine living in the castle at Disney Land? Well if I could I would have the best life ever!I would go on all the rides anytime I wanted to. I would also be Cinderella. It would be so awesome you would want to live with me. With all the people coming to my land, I would get alot of money! I might be the richest girl in the world. You never know.Everybody would scream, shout, and fall out to see me. I would be so popular!

Can't Imagin That

  "Trick or Treat give me something good to eat!" Have you ever imagined dogs going trick or treating? Well I can't but I can now. I wonder if they have candy in their baskets? They probably do but the owners just don't feel like going out. I wish I could do that . Well that's all the time I have.

My Letter to Shay

Dear Shay,

I was in the Underground Railroad! On October 25,1810 I got free! On my journey I almost got caught, but it was Harriet Tubman. She told me that somebody was following me. I was going to Canada all by myself. On the way another family came along with us. I made it to Canada! My heart was saying: FREE AT LAST! FREE AT LAST! THANK GOD ALMIGHTY I'M FREE AT LAST!

                                                           LOVE,

                                            AUTUMN MCLAMORE

Hope for a Giving Tree

Have you ever read an article about saving a tree. Well today in Egale club I'm going to tell you four facts about a tree!

1. There was a girl named Anne Frank who lived in front of a 150 year old chestnut tree.
2. During World WarII her and her family had to hide from Nazis a German political party that tried to get rid of the Jewish people.
3. The Dairy fo Anne Frank  has been published into more that 65 different languages
4. Some people a worried that the tree might collapse,and wanted it chopped down.

Five Steps of Writing!

If you don’t know the five steps of writing that’s ok I will tell you.

The first step is Prewriting: prewriting is where you would think about what you want to write about for your first draft.

The second step is First Draft: First Draft is where you write ideas on paper usually people write more than one first draft.

The third step is Revising: revising is where you check over your work, and improving it.

The fourth step is Editing and Proofreading: editing and proofreading is where you check over it and make sure everything is spelled right and have punctuation ECT.

The fifth step is Publishing : publishing is where you make your paper neat and all spelling is correct this is your finally copy.