I loved your post but where it said "Tina was happy ,but she could never figure out why the window kept opening and why the was a magical land" Instead you said "why the was" I know you probably meant to say "why there was" So maybe you can change that and maybe you can spread apart where the colors are so it doesn't look really really close. But only where red, and purple are!
I don't see anything else wrong in there so your free to continue on your great posts!
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