Once there was a boy he heard weird noises from his basement door. He always heard noises when his parents were there. He always asked his parents what was that noise too, But they always told him,"It's probably the mice."
Then one day his parents left and he was at home by his self. So he went down the stairs,and he could of sworn he heard the closet that was in he basement opened. After that he walked down thee stairs then opened the door. He was to tall to walk through so he crawled through.there was a shiny shoe sticking out, then something closed the door and attacked him and he fainted.
He woke up and said "who are you? someone spoke and said, "it's me." "I don't know who me is," said the boy.
TO BE CONTINUED ( CLICK HERE TO HERE MY PODCAST!Download Shay.mp3 )
Shay I really wanted to know what happened next that means its's good. Would you go in the same door.
Posted by: judtin | December 18, 2007 at 09:08 AM
Shay that was a cool post you had a little mistakes in your post. It was very interesting. All the sentences were there and everything .It was a good post.
Posted by: Autumn | December 18, 2007 at 09:13 AM
That is a good story!I didnt know you could write so well.
Posted by: Deja | March 06, 2008 at 09:09 AM