I am poem

I  am brave  and strong

I wonder about my future

I hear the sound of  war.

I see a dolphin flipping

I want to sing and dance 

I am brave and strong 

I pretend I am a indian

I feel the waters spray

I touch a unicorn

I worry about  my life

I cry for  my dog

I am brave and strong

I  understand  my  work 

I  say  what    I  mean

I  dream   about   Indians

I  try   to   be   brave 

I   hope   to   be   strong

I  am   brave  and  strong

Comments

[Jessica]

my name is Jessica, and I have also just started blogging.I go to a high school in Georgia. I love the way you wrote this poem. I think it is really cool how you repeated "I am brave and strong" several times through out the poem, it made me really believe it. I had to do a poem just like this at the beginning of the year, but it was about a book I read called Great Expectations.
I found a few mistakes, can you figure them out?
Have fun blogging!

[Paige]

Hi Desiree!! My name is Paige. I am a student at a near by Georgia high school. I love your I AM peom. I noticed that you mentioned Indians a lot. You know, there was a very big tribe that lived in Georgia many years ago called the Cherokee. What do you know about them? Have you visited any of the historical sites? Your doing a good job so far. Keep it up!
P.S I like the pink font

[Paige]

Hi Desiree!! My name is Paige. I am a student at a near by Georgia high school. I love your I AM peom. I noticed that you mentioned Indians a lot. You know, there was a very big tribe that lived in Georgia many years ago called the Cherokee. What do you know about them? Have you visited any of the historical sites? Your doing a good job so far. Keep it up!
P.S I like the pink font