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One awsome day I saw my freind Marrisa how looked like louqqsha , but he rally was not. He was the school jok . He was actually cooler than me ! Most people says he looks like Alicia Keys. I can't balive it. He always uses a frindle.
Today I'm going to write about Shaw-D cool post in The Strangest Place Ever!
I think Shaw-D has a great imagination ,and to make it more great he should work on similes. I'm going to give you a sentence that you could work on.
We opened a door and someone screamed.
You could do a sentence like. We opened a door and someone scremed,and saw a bright light it was as bright as the sun.
So work on your writing more bye.
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