It was a common and dark night.Everything was going my way I wanted it .Untel it happened. It was the Jones house. I heard that they were aleins,but I really never balived it.
The reason why I never balived it is because I was freinds with their son Terion. I paused for a second. The house that they lived in lifted up off the ground. I looked out the window and saw a green ,ugly,and old face. It screamed . Ahhhh.It's sucking me in. Help! As I looked down I saw my mom. All she was doing was laguing. Then I knew it my life was over . I did not try to scream anymore. Then when the face noticed I was not screaming it droped me. I got up slowly because I thought I broke a bone . When I knew that I did not brake a bone I ran to my house. And I never seen the house again.
A few days later more than 50% of the people were gone.My dad said we are going to Jamica. And I was relivd. When I got in the car a wift of wind went through me. My dad and I got to ?Jamica.I knew that it was over.
I like your story. I just didn't understand it. It is very choppy.
Posted by: Desiree | December 18, 2007 at 09:10 AM