Once upon a time there were seven dragons whose names were Dart, Shana, Leavits, Meru, Rose, Kongol, and Haschel. They had special powers. Dart had the power of the Red Dragon,Shana had the power of the Light Dragon,Leavit had the power of the Green Dragon,Meru had the power of the Blue Dragon,Rose had the power of the Dark Dragon, Kongol had the power of the Golden Dragon,Haschel had the power of the Purple.And there was a bad Dragon name Luis he had the power of the Pink Dragon and because he was a bad Dragon he was send away and Luis had a army of monsters. One day they gad in a war and in that war they kill Shana,Rose, Kongol, Haschel,Meru,Leavits and. Dart fight Luis and Dart kill Luis and he kill himself. Do you think Dart did the right thing?
He did the wrong thing. I hope you can write more stough in your next story.
Posted by: angel | March 29, 2006 at 10:57 AM
Are you familiar with the trait Organisation?
I don't think the story was very well organised, and it was a list of the names of the dragons and their powers and colour.
Define the characters better and get them doing interesting things.
Posted by: Bronwyn G | March 29, 2006 at 09:05 PM
Hey Victor! I liked thi blog because it tells about dragons. Dragons are one of my favorite mythical creatures.
Posted by: Zachary | May 26, 2006 at 04:54 PM
hey I think this is a very good site but you gotta improve on your grammar
Posted by: jon97 | July 05, 2007 at 05:43 AM
but this a good site about dragons
Posted by: jon97 | July 05, 2007 at 05:45 AM
I love dragons.
Posted by: Mani | April 09, 2008 at 08:48 AM