All about me

I am sweet & kind

I wonder about my future

I hear a baby cry

I see a beach

I wont to do my best

I am sweet & kind

I pretend that I am fling

I feel my grandfathers touch

I touch a baby wales flipper

I cry  for my mom

I am sweet & kind

I understand my oma

I say that the war is over

I dream about my life

I try to understand

I hope to that my dad gets well

I am sweet & kind

Comments

[Orissa DePass-ElAntouri]

I loved the poem! You are a good writer. I hope you will always be "Sweet and Kind"

[Ms. Roper]

I enjoyed reading your "All About Me" poem. I can tell that in addition to be sweet and kind that you are a caring person.
Keep blogging Destiny. You're off to a great start!

[Nydaziah]

Did you know that I loved your blog post and I bet that alot of people loved it to if I could type more I would but I have to go back to my class love blogging with you to so talk to you later

[Oma]

I really liked your poem. It told me alot about your feelings and that you are a sensitive and caring young lady. Keep up the writing, and someday you might write a book, just like your Oma did. Your writing has alot of feelings in it. That's what good writers do. They put their feelings on paper. See you soon.

[Ms. Meyers]

What a nice poem! That was really beautiful.

[Destiny]

Hi oma I really like your comment. Think you for the comment I love you to I think I might write a book like you did I have started writing a book ared. So pleas comment back.

[Lindsay]

That is a very beautiful poem Destiny. The imagery you gave was wonderful. I felt like I was there in the poem. Good job!