what I did over fall break is I went to my cousins house and I had fun first I played and played with his things it was like so fun. On Saturday i went to sleep and the next day i woke up next thing i noticed was that i fell on the floor.it was not ok .then we went to church it was like on sunday it always ends on 3:00am. then we went to eat at mcdonalds.it was so fun. the rest of my day i was just sleeping then we went to school . school is fun it makes you learn. that is all.
Graciela,
I discovered that you didn't check your capitalization. Becuase you didn't capitalize your I's.
Posted by: Thalia | October 28, 2008 at 05:34 AM
I noticed that you had a lot of fun during your holiday. What kind of toys did you play with at your cousins? I am glad that you find school fun, and I hope it stays that way. What are your favorite subjects in school?
Posted by: Kristine Kostyniuk | November 12, 2008 at 12:38 PM