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October 16, 2008

My I Am Poem...

  • I am shy and nervous
  • I wonder wene I grow up
  • I hear horses walk
  • I want to play it again and again
  • I am nervous and shy
  • I pretend I am a pony
  • I feel a unicorns horn
  • I touch a valentines arrow
  • I worry about my famalie
  • I cry for my grandpa
  • I am nervous and shy
  • I understand your parents death
  • I say people are our future
  • I dream for people to be happy
  • I hope about my house
  • I am nervous and shy

Posted at 05:27 AM |

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Ms. Meyers

Beautiful colors! I like the honesty in your poem. It is a great poem. I am shy sometimes, too. I am also a very nervous person! I totally understand what you mean!

Posted by: Ms. Meyers | October 17, 2008 at 05:21 AM

Carolyn

I like how you used color as well as words in your poem. My favorite line in your poem is, "I hear horses walk". As soon as I read it I could hear them to. Do you enjoy writing poetry?

Posted by: Carolyn | October 17, 2008 at 09:53 AM

Lindsay

That is a very pretty poem. You chose a nice variety of colors to put on the text. That is very nice of you to think about others and that you hope they are happy. Do you like horses?

Posted by: Lindsay | October 17, 2008 at 06:35 PM

Harley

Hi Graciela,

I think my favorite part of your poem is when you say "I say people are our future."

With your flair for design and color, I'm wondering if you see yourself designing clothes or home decor in your future?

Paws,
Harley

Posted by: Harley | October 20, 2008 at 04:38 PM

Graciela

Carolyn,
yes i do enjoy writing poetry it is alot of fun.so how is your day as a parent.how many years have you been maried. i wanted to know what your childrens names are. well byee.thank you

Posted by: Graciela | October 21, 2008 at 05:05 AM

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