His blog was about why he doesn't like to free write. I liked it because he has a point. He said he doesn't like to free write because he might get in trouble. He also said he doesn't have ideas. He always gets frustrated. Once his teacher got him in trouble because he didn't have ideas. His teacher thought he was just sitting there , but he was thinking. He helped me because he used descriptive with his words. That's why I liked his blog.
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Hi Ivan,
I like your summary. You said that reading Oscar's post helped you because he used descriptive words.
Can you think of 4 more descriptive words you could use in your post?
Thanks for tip; I'm going to try for more descriptive words in my next post!
Paws,
Harley
Posted by: Harley | December 08, 2008 at 05:05 PM
Your welcome Harley sometimes I like to give tips to people. You can start using more adjectives and adverbs in yor post or comment. Here is more descriptive words Oscar could be smart,thoughtful,kind,and hardworking. Could you think about two adjectives to describe me?
Posted by: Ivan | January 29, 2009 at 05:02 AM