I just read an inspiring post from a girl named Elizabeth from Mr. Howitt's class in China. It was funny, interesting and I liked how she used great ways of describing. Elizabeth's blog has a story of how she found her toothbrush in the toilet with her brother's toothbrush. It was very described and she made it sound funnier than it was if I say, "She found her toothbrush in the toilet." Her post really helped me with writing completely by using great details and just how it made a movie in my head. I could just see the toothbrushes in her toilet. I love to write mystery stories and her story has great suspense which a mystery story should. I loved it! Elizabeth, keep up the great writing!
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