A Poem About Me

I am caring & strong.

I wonder what opportunities lie ahead.

I hear a yelp from a star.

I see planets swooping by.

I want to act & sing.

I am caring & strong.

I pretend to get over tragedies.

I feel crushed when they do happen.

I touch the shooting stars.

I worry about other people's tragedies that may cause death.

I cry when death occurs.

I am caring & strong.

I understand how the world changes.

I say what I think.

I dream of helping the world.

I try to help everyone I can.

I hope people accept me & my help.

I am caring & strong.

Comments

[Ms. Roper]

Rina-
I loved your poem about you. I totally agree that you are caring & strong! Maybe even crazy & smart.
Keep up the amazing blogging!

[Ms. Frascatore]

Rina~

I love your peom...its beautiful. I hope that you continue to write-its a wonderful way to get your emotions out.

I hope that you are enjoying your blogging experience and meeting lots of new and interesting people. I have to say that blogging back and forth with you all has been my first experience with blogging-yet I have enjoyed being able to read how you all are doing.

Keep up the great work!

[Destiny]

Hey Rina I relly like your pome that was sweet.U r a cool girl. U r a smart girl& u rock. Keep up the great work.

Destiny

[Ms. Meyers]

Nice poetry! I really like reading your blogs. I can tell you enjoy blogging because you always use a lot of detail and tell many stories. Keep up the great blogs!

[Rina]

Ms. Meyers,
Thank you! I do love to blog and write stories. I write a lot of mystery stories but sometimes it doesn't show in my wirting about myself. Do you like writing stories? Thanks for commenting me.

[Hey Rina,]

Rina, I love your poem...You are one smart girl who will go far...Keep up the good work...
Love You
Aunt Suzie

[KATHY DENNEWITZ[GRANDMA]]

Rina,
After trying several times to get on this blog, I finally got through and everything you wrote was good as well as interesting. i didn't know that you wrote the poem, and you know what, I used to like to write poetry,but it never was as goo as this. You do have a great love for animals and from what I have seen, where ever you maybe and around an animal, they learn to love you. May all your dreams come true in the future.
Love you,
Grandma

[Elizabeth Lanuza]

Baby!
That is a beautiful poem!! I completely missed it when I read your blog the first time. You are a very talented and mindful person for your age. Keep it up and your success and achievements will be endless. I love you, Rin!

[Ms. Meyers]

I would love to read some of your mystery stories. Mystery stories are so engaging because you can put twists and turns into the plot which keeps the reader always guessing. I definitely enjoy writing; thanks for asking! My favorite type of writing is descriptive writing. It is fun to use interesting verbs, adjectives, adverbs, and nouns.

[KATHY DENNEWITZ[GRANDMA]]

I missed reading the poem at first, not realizing that you had written it, then went back and re-read it. Keep up the good work, maybe in the future, writing poems may be a gift to you as well as taking care of the animal you love.
Love,
Grandma

[Lindsay]

That poem was so nice Rina. I liked how you interchanged the colors in your poem. Do you like writing poems?

[Shannon M]

That was nice. :P

[Rina]

Thanks Shannon!