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Mrs. Meeler


I can definately try to make up a story using idioms, maybe I'll post it on blogwrite!

Your story was great and the idioms you choose fit in very well. Remember to continue to use idioms in your future posts.

The story would have been better if you used more descriptive words and details. You could have described the soccer field, the players, and expressed feelings with your word choice. Did you use dialogue?

Try going back and editing this post so that it is more descriptive.


Marisela i really liked your story it had plenty of idioms as possible and it was packed with details, im sorry you lost your first game. Hopely you will win next time.

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