I was just reading Alex's blog and I learned somethings like an strike in New York so here's some of the stuff I thought was interesting. New York City transportation workers have been on strike for quite a while. Now that they're on the strike New Yorkers have been made to walk because the workers wont work. The reason they're refusing to work is because they want a better pay, health care and respect.
Alex said My thinking is that maybe they will start to wok again. But I hope it will be soon. The people who walk to work in the morning must be freezing". I agree with him because I think it gets pretty cold up there.
Jose-Juan:
You found an interesting post and made a great connection. However, remember to separate what you said from what someone else said by using quotation marks and different font colors. Also, remember to proofread very carefully. I found some mistakes in your writing.
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | January 06, 2006 at 07:31 AM
Hi Jose-Juan!
Mrs. Meeler if giving you some good advice. Be sure to proofread! You are such a good thinker. I enjoyed your story that you shared about learning English. I hope you will blog about that one day.
Go to:
http://itc.blogs.com/thewriteweblog/2005/03/tips_from_thewr.html
You will see a great list of tips that will help you with your proofreading. Let me know which tip you find the most useful!
Mrs. Davis
Posted by: Anne Davis | January 10, 2006 at 05:51 AM