My New Year Resolutions

    Many of you may know what New Year Resolutions are. Well if you don't later on I`ll tell you some of my resolutions and then tell you the answer. My resolutions for writing are making my post longer, creating  titles that are catchy, more details, descriptive words, to write about topic that haven`t been chosen as much. I`ll improve my my writing  by indenting my paragraphs , have correct grammar the first time, I`ll have the five w`s (who, when, where, when, and why) so my reader will have enough information. I will make my question make the reader stop and think. "I also wont exaggerate the truth," like Alejandro said. Ashley also said "Make you blog entertaining" Last Juan said"Use strong words at the beginning".

       So do you know what New Year Resolutions are. Well if you still don`t they`re kind of promises you make to yourself. Well now that you know what they are so what are your New Year Resolutions and why?

Comments

[Bronwyn G]

When I came to your blog, I wanted to read all about your visit to the Legisature to show them how wonderful elementary student blogging can be. That will be a good opportunity to keep your New Years' Resolutions.

You used 'my' twice in one sentence, and you spaced your commas. You really don't need to do this. When you talked about correct grammar the first time, the verb is "having" not "have", unless you are making a list. The 5 Ws and a H are a good resolution, and the reverse pyramid (a common journalistic strategy - bloggers make terrific journalists because they are always up on the news!)

My New Years' Resolution is to write more and to write better because I am a professional writer. I would especially like to enter more competitions and get into more journals, for my poetry.

I would also like to help more people and to travel more. Because helping people, I feel true to myself and I am a better citizen, which I know matters to JHH students much. I would like to travel more because I can stretch my horizons. I would also like to exercise more this New Year and keep healthy.

It would be good if you could pick unique topics. Some of the Brune students chose topics twice. I suspect it was group work. Now your own class is much smaller, so there's less of that happening. While it's interesting to see different bloggers' point of view, it can get very wearing on the reader. So do choose unique topics, and enhance them with details (the right detail can really attract the right audience).

Happy New Year, Jose-Juan.

[brandon]

My New year resolution is to do better in school.

[martin]

Mine is to always be healthy.

[tolikimer]

Hello

Definitely nice and neat site you got there.


G'night