You know how that last post was 'bout da Traits? Well now we're doing them in metaphors. I choose to do Cars! 
Ideas and content- This would be describing the interior and exterior of the car describing the color and the seating and the way it looks.
Organization- This would be the way the engines set up so it runs right.And doesn't mess up.
Voice- The color and type of seat you choose.
Sentence Fluency- How big/wide the tires and seats and enigne is.
Conventions- A messed up transmisson. it would need fixing.
Word Choice- The type of car you would choose.
That was fun! I love writing! Later days!
Hi Jason,
Isn't it great to have fun while you are writing! If you had to share with other students the reasons why you love writing, what would you say? Wouldn't it be neat if you could pass along that love? Pay it forward.....
I have posted about you in one of my blogs and told my readers that your blog is a must-read! Keep up the good work!
Mrs. Davis
Posted by: Anne Davis | May 05, 2006 at 05:10 AM
I love reading your posts.
Posted by: jason | May 11, 2006 at 05:37 AM