Jadae's Weblog

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          Today is the last  day of webblogging. I'm very sad that I want do webbloging anymore. I will be in the six grade next year.I would give thanks to Mrs.hooper for proving weblogging.

I had really enjoyed being in weblogs. It is so fun . There are 9 kids in weblogs.I will miss everyone!

Tall-Tales and Heroes

                 Last week on Tuesday, the chorus kids did a play called Tall-Tales and Heroes. It's a play about John Henry, Calamity Jane, Molly Pitcher, Johnny Appleseed, Paul Bunyan, Davy Crockett and others.

                I was real excited and shy about the show. I never knew there would be a lot of people there. There was one of the weblog students there.  It was Derrick and some were sitting up laughing there tails off.My best-friend Becky thought I did a good job.

                   I was playing as the part Shirley. I was in the Paul Bunyan story. It was so fun. In my scene Paul Bunyan  is Jake. It was also Lumberjacks. I t was the best day of my life!

Beds

    Ideas and content-cover,sheets,matress,pillow.

     Organization-What's the color?

     Vioce-sheets with curious anious.

     Sentence fluency- Beds cocome in all shapes and sizes.      

        Conventions-pillow for the pillow case of the pillow wouldn't be shown.

       Word Choice-cover to match sheets and the pillow case.