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Anne Davis

Hi Jadae,
I found your metaphor to be most interesting! Remember though to use spell check. You want your work to be the best possible! I was not sure just what you were suggesting for voice. I'm curious about that one.

I always enjoy reading your posts so do all you can do to make your writing shine! You are a smart student!

Mrs. Davis

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