Model My Six Traits

                     I'm going to tell a story about the six traits. We use the six traits for writing. The six traits is important. They help us with our writing. It shows us what we need.

             Do you know the six traits? I'll tell you a story about the six traits. One day a paper talked to the six traits. When you use ideas and content you have to know the topic. Ideas said, ''Does my brain have enough ideas.'' Content asked Organization, ''Do you have an organ for your organization.'' ''My readers like that they hear my voice,''replied voice. ''I use  any exciting  word'' said words. ''I use alot of sentenses, I use complete sentenses,'' said sentence fluency. When I think of conventions I think of every thing.

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[Bronwyn G]

Conventions said, "Please make a new line for each speaker."

And Ideas, Organisation, Voice, Words and Fluency found their place with correct spelling and grammar.

That way everyone was happy.

The end