"A Delightful Comment"

   I just love getting comments from my best friends to people in an other country. Each and every comment is important to me.  And very valuable. I especially like the ones my friends make.

   One comment I totally adore is the one of my best friend made. The comment is special because she didn't just give me a sentence but a whole paragraph! Her comment let me come up close to what she really thinks. I wish many other people could make comments like her. The part I like the most about her comment is this part:

   "I do imagine how the party was. My sister is all most going to be fifteen and we are also going to make her sweet 15. She is going to be fifteen this year, maybe in December 22. And we are going to make her party 3days after her birthday. And we are going to make it in

Mexico

. I can't wait for her party."

  You can finish reading her comment if you want to read it. Just click here "My Sister's Sweet 15".

   If you had a web log what kind of comments would you like best and why? What kind of people would you like to be commented by?

Comments

[Chloe]

Graciela,
I like getting comments, too. It makes me feel good to know that people like my writing! How about you?
Thanks for the comment on my blog. I wrote the poem for a handwriting assignment, so it wasn't to hard to write. I like writing poems, though. I've written a few. But they are so hard to rhyme!!! :)

[Ms. Roper]

Graciela,
Getting comments on a blog is thrilling. It shows that someone has read what you have written. That they have connected with it in a way that makes them want to respond.
Comments from the students of JHH are my favorite. My blog allows me to share more health & fitness information with my students and find out what you all enjoy doing in class. It is also very exciting to get comments from people outside of JHH.

[graciela]

Chloe, yes i do love getting comments. It makes me feel like I have godd friends.

[Bronwyn G]

Chloe, many of the best poems in the world don't rhyme. Many poems have internal rhythm. In fact, my poetry teacher told me when I rhyme, I am very glib in my ideas. That wasn't very nice, but it was true. Try writing a non-rhyming poem and see how it feels and how it stands up.

I like to receive comments from students who have read my blog and enjoy it, and also teachers who like to use ideas. My favourite comment was probably from Anne Davis, because she has opened up the world for me so much.