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Mrs. Meeler

Graciela -

I have a one-year old daughter who keeps my life very busy! I know how tiring baby sitting can be, but it is also a lot of fun.

Did you enjoy using idioms in your writing? I want you to try to use at least one idiom in every post now. Do you think that will be hard?

Your story was very interesting. Could you have added more details to your story? Remember to paint a picture with your words as you write.

Keep up the good work!

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