Last week I didn't get to finish my post. And I know many people want to finish reading it. This part is packed with extra fun, sweets, and words that will be extra delicious. I hope you enjoy Part Two of the yummiest story you have ever read.
Part Two
But something that really caught my attention was that our brick stairs were actually crushed together cinnamon apple candy. At first I thought it was a dream but now I knew it was going to be fun. My sister told me that it was time to go in. At last we fell asleep.
The next morning,my sister woke me up and told me that it was time to get ready for school. I was so excited about how my school was going to look like. When I finished getting ready. I quickly peeked out the door and the buses looked amazing! The wheels and tires were Orel cookies, and the rest of the bus was hard lemon scented flavored candy, that couldn't be eaten. The same for the houses and trees.
When I got on the bus all the other children were also smiling and excited. When we finally got to school it was huge and yummy looking. Of course the whole bus started to say "OOH" "Ahh." The school was also crushed together cinnamon apple bricks, like our stairs. And the trees were large ice cream cones!
When we went inside the school, the large white bricks were actually vanilla! And the water fountains had five fountains in a row. You could choose from hot chocolate with marshmallows, water sprinkles, soda, or jelly beans. The classrooms were even better, the seats were cotton candy.
All day I thought about the delicious sweets. I just wondered how the Statue of Liberty and how the Eiffel Tower looked like. How I would love to talk more about how delicious the world looked. It can be even better it you imagine it in another way.
What did you think about part one and part two of the story? What part did you like better?
Brownwyn has challenged you to a part 3. Are you up for it?
The details in this story are terrific. It reminds of Charlie Wonka and the Chocolate Factory!
Excellent work.
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | January 27, 2006 at 07:50 AM