Chloe's Post.

  As I was entering a very interesting class post all the way from Mamaroneck Avenue Elementary School in Mamaroneck,New York, taught by Gordon Brune. I was very excited to see how many interesting blogs there were, so I had to choose one and I decided it would be Chloe's Weblog. So I went into her blog and there were so many interesting posts to choose from there too, it was another big argument with myself, so I chose one that really caught my attention. It was called "My Pets". I really enjoyed reading it because I really enjoy spending time with my pets. I hope you will really like it too that is why I put on my post. 

Marshmallow, my dog, loves to run around. She looks like her name: a puffy marshmallow! When she runs, like race-winning running, she looks like she’s galloping. She also loves to chase the waves (and run away from the big ones) in the ocean. She’s a good swimmer.Marshie (one of her nicknames, like Moo-Moo) likes to play games. Tug-of-war is her favorite. She also likes to go on walks. Or, as we call them, runs. She ALWAYS pulls you along, making you run. She loves to sleep with you. She lets me get her on my bed and lay her next to me. Then I hold her and fall asleep. When I wake up in the morning, she’s on the floor.Some people are scared of her. They are because when she was a puppy, she would jump on you when you came in the door. That got every one scared. Now, she doesn’t do it as much, but people are still scared of her.I love my dog.

   

What I think

When I finished reading this post I really enjoyed it because it reminds me of my golden retriever named Buddy. Buddy always made me smile and laugh. But sometimes he enjoyed his life a little too much. I'm glad I had him. But now I’m excited because I'm getting a new puppy! I already posted about the puppy I will get. You can go there it's called A New Pet.

  I hope you enjoyed part of the post she posted.

What part do you like better and why?

Comments

[Mrs. Meeler]

Graciela - your introduction was great! I loved how you described what you were thinking. You did a great job making a connection between what you were thinking and what you read. Next time, take a shorter excerpt from the article or post you are writing about. Remember, the link is there for people to visit in case they want to read more. Great job!