On April 20, 2002, was my sister's sweet 15. We were all very excited. We invited many people, our cousins and friends. Even people we did not know.
The first place we went to was our church, St. Pius X Catholic Church. Many people did not go, but the room was still very full. My sister looked very pretty, like a princess. Her dress was sparkling from the sun shining thought the the huge windows. By the way her dress was also puffy from the bottom and a very beautiful color of baby blue. When the priest was finished we all walked out the huge room. Then we all gave her a BIG hug. It took a while though.
When we went to the reception the inside was so big and decorated.Of course my sister got her own table with blue flowers.There was also a lot of food but I did not any, it looked really gross. But I did have fun though. When everybody was finished eating everybody was finished eating, it was time for the big dance. Everybody was screaming and clapping others were taking pictures and recording everything.
After the dance it was time for the cake, it was delicious. It was so gorgeous.On the bottom of it was a little fountain, with shining blue water on it. I sometimes imagine if my sweet fifteen would be that pretty. When everybody left my sister put her beautiful presents inside the truck. She still has all the presents. Also her crown and dress. I can't until I might have my sweet 15.
Do you imagine how it was?
Graciela,
I loved reading about your sister's Sweet 15 party. I've never been to a Sweet 15 celebration, but your description was so fine that I could truly imagine your sister with the light shimmering on her blue dress. Thank you for letting me see that in my imagination.
I live in upstate New York, right near Lake Ontario. It is far from you, but your blog let me be right there for just a few minutes.
Posted by: Mrs. G | October 14, 2005 at 05:33 PM
I thinkyou had a very good time.I realy like going to sweet 15.I love to dance alot.
Posted by: Adriana | October 18, 2005 at 10:05 AM
Graciela - I felt like I was at your sister's party! I was able to imagine exactly how it was because of our excellent details and descriptive words. Your writing is really improving. Keep up the good work!
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | October 19, 2005 at 06:48 AM
Graciela,
I really liked reading about your sisters sweet 15. I could really imagine what it was like. I can tell that you had fun.
Posted by: Diana | October 19, 2005 at 11:04 AM
I love writing
Posted by: derrick | October 20, 2005 at 05:51 AM
Hi there.
I was reading you post and i saw your post about your sisters birthday. That sounds like alot of fun! What kind of presents did she get for her birthday??
Well im glad that you had fun!
-caitlin
Posted by: Caitlin | October 20, 2005 at 06:00 AM
I do imagine how the party was.My sister is all most going to be fiftean and we are also going to make her sweet 15. She is going to be fiftean this year, maybe in December 22. And we are going to make her party 3days after her birthday. And we are going to make it in Mexico. I can't wait for her party .Did'nt your sister ever fuzzed about her paty, well my sister does she is always telling me that she can't wait for her party. And she wants to be fiftean already. Well I have to live I would like to type more but my time is running out I just want to say some thing, YOU ARE VERY CREATIVE!!!!!!
Posted by: maria | October 20, 2005 at 11:12 AM
sounds like your sisters party was a whole lot of fun . my sister had a party as well n it was really fun. she had it in the Dominican Republic ; because that is were all our family is well the majority... it was a blast imagine it ended at 4 a.m but it sounds to me that ur sister sweet 15 was amazing execpt 4 the food...= )
i enjoyed readin your story!
Posted by: denise | July 27, 2006 at 03:44 PM
Hey, well ur sister's party sounds like u guys had a lot of fun except for the food that u said was gross! Well my sister had a party to and her dress was also baby blue! I can't wait until mine, it's gonna be so much fun.
Posted by: alma | November 15, 2006 at 06:21 AM
I REALLY LIKED READING YOUR STORY ABOUT YOUR SISTERS SWEET 15....IM SURE SHE LOOKED BEAUTIFUL...I CANT WAIT TILL MINE...
Posted by: cynthia | November 23, 2006 at 03:09 PM
hey i liked your sisters story about her sweet 15 it sounded really good i cant wait up to i have mines after i read your i got really hipe i liked it enjoy more!!!!!!!!lol
Posted by: claudia ortiz | July 24, 2007 at 07:22 PM