Diana's Weblog

"Podcasting:Chapter Two"

I did not just have to do a comment to him I had to do the comment but I did not have to write it I had to podcast it to him. Last Thursday Mrs.Anne Davis came once more to J.H.House. She came because she wanted to podcast all of us in webblogging. But this time we had to do something more difficult. We had to all do a comment to someone in Mrs.Neville's second grade class.The person that I had to do the comment to was Ian. 

    But it was not like the other one we did.At first when Mrs.Davis said we had to do a podcast to them I was like imbarased and shy to do it but when I really did do it it wasn't so bad. I thought it was going to be like the last podcast we did but it was not this one was a little more interesting. I liked this one more because I kind of had an idea of what it was going to be like. 

    I am going to give some ideas and contenents I am also going to give some Organization and also voice and word choice:

     Ideas And Content:

• What is my topic?
• Is my paper clear?
• Did I try to make my writing come alive?
• Do I have enough details?
• Do I have a good begining middle and end?
• Does my reader understand what I am trying to say?
• Have I included any dialogue?
• What about writing my ideas down and choosing the best one?
• Do I have an orginazation?
• And Do I have enough details?

      Organization:

• How does my topic start?
• Are the details in order?
• Is my paper easy to read?
• Is my paper in time order?
• Does my writing have a good beggining?
• Are all the details in the correct sequence?
• Do my links go with my message?
• How does my topic end?

 

        Voice:

• Is this interesting to me?
• Did I give my opinion?
• Did I say everything I wanted to?
• What did I like the most?
• Did my readers feel that they could hear my voice?
• Do I like what I wrote?
• Am I comfortable with what I wrote?
• Does my story match my attitude?
• How do I want my readers to feel?

         Word Choice:

• Does your writing flow?
• Have I used any exciting words?
• Did you use any vivid vocabulary?
• Did I use different or interesting words?
• Will they make a good comment?
• Do you have descriptive words?
• Did I grab my readers attention with my words?

          This is all that I have for you right now and I will try not to make it extremely long like this one but still I hope you like it.

                                                                        What did you think?

   

Jackpot

   Here comes more good news. Did you know that eight people have won the biggest lottery in the

U.S.

Also a group of co-workers from

Nebraska

won the $365 million Powerball Prize. When all of the taxes have been taken out each winner will recieve 15.5 million.

  One of the great lucky winners, Mike Terpstra, is not sure what she is going to do with all of the money. Mike said that everyone has a dream.

   All of the winning tickets were bought at a conenience store in Lincoln, Nebraska on Febuary 17. The winning numbers were 15, 17, 43, 44, and 48 and a powerball number of 29 were drawn on Saturday. 

    Lottery is a form of gambling that is run by a state. The states get money from the lottery tickets. A common way to run the lottery is to divide the tickets cost.

     Many people say that lottery is like gambling. People may become addicted to gambling. Problems sometimes occur as people spend money supporting their gambling habit. For the same reason that is going on, many forms of gambling areas are illegal. But state controlled lotteries are llegal. Although they say that gambling is illegal. They also say that they should have a different way of earning money.

  If I would have a chance to win the lottery I would not know what to do with it all. I do not think lottery is like gambling. I don't think that because lottery and gambling do not sound alike nor seem like they are related at all. That is what I think.

                        What do you think about this?

Recreating My New Post

  You have heard about this story before so it will seem familiar to you. I am writing one of my posts over. I am writing it over because the first one was a little weird and I would like to make it look better. On the first post I realized that I made spelling and punctuation errors. But I hope that in this post it will be much better.  Also on the first post I really did not add a lot of details. On this post I would like to have more details than I did on the first one.

    I would like to start of with the subjects that I like the most. The subjects that I like to do are writing and math. I really enjoy writing because I am a person who really likes to write. And I like math because I like to do math facts and I also like it because because most of the time the things that we do are easy but still sometimes everything is not easy. Writing and math have always been my favorite subjects. So now you know what subjects I like to do the most.

    There are other things that I also like to do. I really like to be with my friends and family.My friends and I will just have fun if we walk and talk for a while. I also love being with my family, because we can go out and have lots of fun. How I have had fun with my parents is when my dad sometimes goes to our yard and plays with us we often play Basketball, soccer, and sometimes even tennis I think that my dad is lots of fun. I also ask my parents if they would let me take my friends to the movies or to go shopping and sometimes they may say yes.Once I remember a time that we went to skate night and my parents told me that I could take a friend and I took one of my cousins with us and we had a blast it was so much fun. My cousin and I would go and skate together and play some of the games that they have over there.  I really do love being with my family and friends because we have lots of fun.

    I was really looking forward to having my own weblog. I hope that having my own weblog will be a good experiance for me because I really enjoy typing and I also love to write. I am glad that I had to finish my very first weblog.   In weblogs I have learned so many things that I could not learn in my classes. Weblogging is a really good thing and I really enjoy being in it. I was glad when my teacher asked me if I wanted to be in webloggs. And I said "sure" that I would like to be in it.

                     Do you think that this post is better than the first one and why? 

   

All a Dream

  Today we are writing about extra Wacky Tales. My post may be a little long but I really liked doing it. It really catched my eye.

   

    I fell asleep yesterday listening to an old album that my mom had. I really enjoyed it, though I had a weird dream. It was kind of like one of the old songs.

I've been workin' in

Mexico

,
All the blue day.
I've been workin' in

Mexico

,
Just to pass the time away.
Don't you hear the whistle laughing?
Rise up so early in the morn.
Don't you hear Yandel shouting
“Marisol, fly your horn? ”

Marisol, won't you fly,
Marisol, won't you fly,
Marisol, won't you fly your horn?
Marisol, won't you fly,
Marisol, won't you fly,
Marisol, won't you fly your horn?

Someone's in the living room with Marisol.
Someone's in the living room, I know.
Someone's in the living room with Marisol
Strumming on the old Guitar.

It was the weirdest dream I've had in a long time!