Today I am going to write a story. In this story I am going to put as many idioms as I can. This story is going to be about a boy and his class in a play.
The boy is going to be the leader in the school play. He is really nervous. When they went to try out he was even more nervous. His class mates told him to chill out for a while and he did. When it was time for him to try out he was shy. The teacher asked him,"did the cat get your tongue." The teacher said again that he has to at least try it or she will clip his wings. The boy did calm down. He tried it and his fear went away.
They rehearsed every Wednesday and every Monday at 5:00 p.m. They got better and better each day that they were as cool as a cucumber. Finally they were at their last rehearsal and they were excited.
The day of the play was finally here and the whole class said were all ears because they were about to announce them on stage. The students went on stage and the teacher said break a leg. So did the boy because he didn't go on stage he was going to do the second part alone. The students came back with the teacher and the boy went on stage. When he was done the audience brought down the house.
Do you think the boy had fun after all?
Diana:
I liked the idioms you used in your story, but the story lacked some important details that could have made it more interesting.
What was the boy's name? What was the teacher's name? What was the name of the play they were rehearsing and producing?
Remember to add descriptive words and details to all of your posts!
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | February 13, 2006 at 07:42 AM
Mrs.Meeler the boys name was Ralph and the teachers name was Mrs.Dark.
Posted by: Diana Ayala | February 16, 2006 at 05:47 AM