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Mrs. Meeler


I liked the idioms you used in your story, but the story lacked some important details that could have made it more interesting.

What was the boy's name? What was the teacher's name? What was the name of the play they were rehearsing and producing?

Remember to add descriptive words and details to all of your posts!

Diana Ayala

Mrs.Meeler the boys name was Ralph and the teachers name was Mrs.Dark.

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