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Bronwyn G

I hope you go back to Mexico soon too.

Could you show the sadness rather than tell it? Use body language of some of the characters (in this case, your family) and just expand on their feelings a bit.

Make the goodbye scene very dramatic and funny! That will make people wonder what will happen next.


I feel bad for you not able to get to stay at Mexico.


Thank you Marisela for feeling bad for me.

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