As you see I am writing the post over. I am writing it over because the other one was not right and I did not like it. I also think that you did not like it either. So I hope that you like this one more than you did the other one.
When artist McCullough went to the gas station in Wolfboro, New Hampshire he blinked because the gas prices used to be $1.36 and now the price is $1.49. Senator Bob Dole said that the high gas prices are President Bill Clinton's fault. High gas prices made one good effect though people will drive less and their would be less population.
The price of oil is super high and people around the world are really feeling the pinch of the gas pump. The president wants to help the American people have enough beat in their homes.So they will not need so much more.
More than half of London's gas stations are out of gas. France and Scotland gas is also in short supply. Many gas stations are closed and it is causing problems for people who get to work in cars and buses. Gas in Britain costs about $4.31 a gallon that is more than any other country in Europe. Britain is not the only country that has citizens angered by high gas prices. A lot of other countries do too.
Do you think I need to make more changes?
Diana - your revised post is really good. With the exception of one or two typos, I can tell you put in a lot of hard work. What I liked most about the new post was how you put the article in your own words! I could really hear your voice when I read it. I know that putting it in your own words is sometimes the hardest part of writing, but if you keep practicing it will become much easier.
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | November 03, 2005 at 07:59 AM
You did a super job!!!
Posted by: Kelly Hutcherson | November 05, 2005 at 11:44 AM
I liked your artical very much. Maybe you can answer a question for me. Is the European gallon of gas the same quantity as a USA gallon of gas?
Posted by: George Walker | November 07, 2005 at 05:37 AM
I just wanted to thank you and your class for sharing your blogs with me. I have been around computers and its technology for over 2 decades, but until now never knew what a blog was. Thank you for making me that much wiser!
Posted by: E.Hill | November 07, 2005 at 09:53 AM
Hi mt name is Tyler i heard about how school's are starting to use blogging as a part of lesson plans. So i decided to check it out thanks ill check back
Tyler Hudson
Fort Worth, Texas
Posted by: Tyler Hudson | November 07, 2005 at 02:24 PM