A while ago in September I posted my first blog. Now that I am bigger and a better blogger I see my writing back then was not so good. So I am going to rewrite or revise my first post.
As you know now my name is Derrick. I am now 11 years old. I am an A/B honor student. My favorite subjects are reading and spelling. Math is my weakest subject but I still try hard in math.
My favorite sports are football and basketball. I think Allen Iverson is the best player in the NBA, he plays for the 76ers. Troy Polamalu is the best in the NFL who plays for the Superbowl winners the Pitsburg Steelers. I use to play both sports. In basketball we won the championship but in football we went to the playoffs. I still had fun in both sports.
I have two sisters and no brothers. They are 3 and 16. The sixteen year old doesn't live with me, she lives with her mom in Michigan. My mom is from Ohio and my dad is from Michigan. I am from Atlanta Georgia and so is my 3 year old sister.
I also like music. My favorite types of music are R&B, Rap, and Gospel. I like Al Green, Young Jeezy, Kirk Franklin, Alecia Keys, and Gladis Night. I have a lot of friends at JHHouse.Here are some of them: Angel E, Micheal Roz, Lisa Roz, Brinesha, and others.
Now enough about me, tell me about you.
Tell Me Your Traits and Why You Like Them?
I'm glad you try hard in maths. Jadae is really good at maths, so she thinks. It's hard to assess our abilities in these things. I like my vocabulary and word choice because it makes me me, and I like the way I can stick it out over a long piece of writing. I like myself when I am being kind and considerate towards other people who are writing too, and I like my ability to make friends all over the world!
Posted by: Bronwyn G | March 09, 2006 at 09:56 AM
I am athletic and enjoy being physically active. I also enjoy reading and of course blogging!
Derrick - look at your very last paragraph. What do you think is wrong with it? If you could write it over, how would you rewrite it?
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | March 13, 2006 at 10:51 AM
My singer is Mariah Carey.
Posted by: angel | March 15, 2006 at 11:09 AM
Mine too, Angel!
Did you like her latest, "We Belong Together?"
Posted by: Bronwyn G | March 15, 2006 at 02:03 PM
Hi Derrick,
I enjoyed reading your revised post. I also really was amazed and pleased at all the very kind and interesting comments you have been leaving on your classmate's blogs. You are a good commenter as well as a good blogger. Are you ready for another podcast? If so, what topic or question do you think would be of interest for others to hear?
Mrs. Davis
Posted by: Anne Davis | March 17, 2006 at 12:08 PM