One day I went to my friends house after school to play. When I walked in his house I saw him laying down on his bed. His face was a red cherry and he had a horse voice. I thought to myself he was as sick as a dog. When he saw me he jumped out of bed and said,"Lets play." Then I said,"You need to chill you are sick and you need to rest.
I was about to go home until it started raining cats and dogs. I was having a horrible day. I was so mad I started to bounce off the walls. I told my friend as soon as it stopped raining I was leaving. While we where waiting for it to stop raining I took a nap. I was having beauty sleep. Nobody was going to wake me up. I woke up two hours later and it stopped raining. I looked to see where my friend was. I saw him playing and running around.I said how did you get better. He said, I wasn't sick I just wanted to trick you.I was so mad I walked out the door and slammed it .
Have You Every Had a Very Bad Day?
Yes, occasionally I have a bad day. Fortunately, most days are good though.
I remember when I was young (like in 2nd or 3rd grade) one of my older sister's friends played a trick on me. She had me believing that no one liked my sister and she was only friends with her because she felt sorry for her. When I started getting upset, she laughed and said she was just playing. But I didn't think it was too funny and neither did my sister.
I liked the use of your idioms in your story. I hope you will continue to use idioms in your writing all the time now.
One thing I did notice is that you didn't use correct punctuation with your dialoge. Remember the help Brownwyn G. gave you about using quotation marks (")? We will go over this in detail in class.
Keep up the good blogging!
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | February 13, 2006 at 07:57 AM
Yes,I had a very bad day like that before. Don't you just hate it.
Posted by: celest | February 13, 2006 at 10:50 AM
I would hate to take a nap at my friend's house. I would also be mad if my friend pretended to be sick.
Posted by: jake | February 17, 2006 at 10:42 AM
I've had very many days.that were bad for me. Some were when my family didn't celebrate my birthday.Some when it rained when I wanted to play outside. Some when I play one of my PS2's and the power turned off when I was on the last level.And some when a family member couldn't come home one day. There is always a bad thing waiting for me each day.
Posted by: Theresa | February 17, 2006 at 10:48 AM