This is my first time really blogging. The steps are first you read, then you think about what you are reading. The third step is to make connections about what you are reading and what someone else is writing. You may decide to write about what you are reading and even do some linking as you go! What inspired me is Mr. Brune's student Chloe. She inspired me by her interview. She said things to the person she interviewed like what's your favorite color then they would make a scene out of a simple question. I think that was a good post to read. She brought comedy to writing and I love comedy! She had what to interview it was like mouth watering. The way she brought comedy to writing for example when she said:
C: What is your favorite movie that you acted in?
A: Ummm…I like the movie “Girls Rule Boys Drool” because the boys were like drooling a lot.or when she said:
C: Last but not least, how old are you and when is your birthday?
A: First my birthday is in February on the 28th. And second of all is it any of your business how old I am?!?!WHAT SOMETHING YOU DO THAT IS TRUE TO YOU!
Derrick - you made a good point about Chloe bringing comedy to her writing. I like comedy too. In fact, adding humor is one of the tips last year's group left for you. Is that one of your New Year's Resolutions for Writing?
When you ask your question at the end of your post, make sure it is relevant to your topic.
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | January 06, 2006 at 07:15 AM
Hey Derrick, I enjoyed your blog! It was really neat, well, bye.
Posted by: Jacqueline Moore | January 06, 2006 at 01:04 PM
The thing true to me is soccer.I mean soccer is what I do.
Posted by: brandon | January 09, 2006 at 10:46 AM
Derrick,
Thanks for writing about me!!!!! Did you know that I actually intterviewed her? Ha ha! I interviewed Alexa. We made up what she said as Ally. It was fun!
Posted by: Chloe from Mr. Brune's Class | January 10, 2006 at 11:10 AM
My favert pet is a hamster I like them because they are cut.
Posted by: jesus | January 10, 2006 at 11:30 AM
Thank you for commenting jacqueline I haven't heard from you in a long time hope you have a good year. Keep comenting!
Posted by: derrick | January 12, 2006 at 06:09 AM
We were just started reading
some blogs. It was good.
Ian
Posted by: Ian | January 19, 2006 at 06:48 AM
Hi Ian from Ms Neville's class,
Glad you enjoyed Derrick's blog. And all the other blogs which you have read, of course.
As Derrick said, what's something you do which is true to you?
Posted by: Bronwyn G | January 19, 2006 at 03:29 PM
Dear Bronwyn G,
Hockey is true to me. It's true to me because all of my cousins play it. I like it because sometimes every time I learn somthing new.
Ian
Posted by: Ian | February 03, 2006 at 06:51 AM
Glad you enjoy learning new things, Ian.
And I'm glad hockey is true to you. You must have a great time with your cousins. I wish my cousins had such a great sport to unify them.
Posted by: Bronwyn G | February 03, 2006 at 04:39 PM
Hi. In the future I'm going to keep here links to their sites. But I do not worry about the sites where my link is removed. So if you do not want to see a mountain of links, simply delete this message. After 2 weeks, I will come back and check.
Posted by: Carlotta | May 11, 2009 at 08:58 AM